Recommended improvements

 These are the recommended improvements to our film which we plan on doing.

· The name of your production company needs to be on screen about 2 seconds longer.

· Capital and lower case letters need to be consistent across your titles – some are half and half.

· Sound after your title appears, there is none.

· Title card needs to be on for longer – I will let you have it at the end of the two minutes because of how your build it up.

Rough Draft of our Film

Changes made to Rough Edit

Once we recieved feedback we made the following changes,

• Our titles were moving to fast and were not big enough for the audience to see them properly so we decided to slow them down and make them larger.
• We had numerous shots of Gordon walking up the staircase which we decided to cut. This shortened the sequence as we found it was not necessary in the storyline.
• The narration was read at a steady speed however our playground scene was still to long, so we decided to change the speed at which is played to fit the narration better.
• Our film is an independent British Indie film so we thought that Studiocanal would suit the feel of the film better than Eon Productions, which is known for producing James Bond.
• We decided to fade the music out instead of cutting it off as it made it less noticable to the audience.

The Process of Editing

We have finished filming and now have started editing our film. During the editing we found make the film link smoothly from one shot into another a challenge, this was especially important as we wanted a shot reverse shot for the conversation between Gordon and the secretary. This was challenging due to not fully understanding how to work the editing programme.

Filming

This is the first couple of seconds of filming for our film.